first time i saw him he was laughing very much
but i understood he mentally injured and depressed
i pointed him loving, philosophy and mysticism
he was rejoiced and in his imagination deeply obsessed
he asked me about love, confidence and friendship
to their own settlements he was carefully addressed
he had a great heart of loving and life
dishonesty and iniquity were completely suppressed
we persuaded each other in fraternity and love
no need a blood test, he indirectly confessed
his only fault was missing the unique god
in his approach worship was a resisting arrest
he avoided and missed me cos of this manner
he counted me just as an unwelcome guest
he was a chick in farm of the world
he thought about my ideas as fowl pest
i cant fight with this, it is my fate
only god can change this, it is his behest
world and fate, help me in this matter
i love our brotherhood, is my last request.
Well written..........A humane observation.... do write more....
An analytic poem on friendship and love....Love is a lamp of heaven indeed thanks Bros
Nice poem where friendship and love were analyzed from diff angles and justified them. Loved it.
very nice indeed i know how you feel about this, love is not only a word or our actions, love is somethings much greater and i see it in your lines, i have felt it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
your feelings are beautifully expressed... nice poem..