My Dear Buddy Poem by Vidi Writes

My Dear Buddy

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These problem... complexes are not just yours
We all have witnessed and sailed through those mess
Now we sit and laugh... 'hey... why was that low? '
May be blind with too much of desires and moved slow.

We do perfectly understand your plight
Can't advice you or tell the truth in a slate
Its you to handle and fiddle those problems
Tricks and wits of life can save us a lot, plums.

Varieties and verity helps... a great to be alive
There are so many too much vulnerable... live
Just breathing the polluted air...and grieve
Why don't u see them… you are better, believe.

Life, takes its call on you as long as you run
Stand and face it and shake a bit of your read in turn
In question.. whattt? ? 'Han... I know to manage my burn'
Let thousand problems fall, I am stubborn.


Attitude... dear boy...
That gives us self confidence, a ploy
But of course... to have it you have to walk and play
Take a look, stand and watch on a clay

Try to get into that silent moment
Where you don't make noise but observe other's lament
You will see all those around you have same comment
Are sailing in somewhat same boat, with fashion art.


So little buddy... nothing is wrong
You feel odd and low is a song
But never think its only odd gang
Try... up... up... and... there you belong

Ladder surely there...
Its time you reach upto there.
All well wishes with you, beware
Waiting to read your sweet song, I swear.

(This poem written to my dear buddy in mail
Later thought, its wise to post, so all to sail)


Vidi
18/10/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 30 October 2009

it's a good mail...a good poem...a good sail...a poetic lecture on how attitude helps...your buddy apart, all those who read this worthy advice will benefit out of it provided they care to listen twice...encouraging piece Vidi...10

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Rakesh Bedi 18 October 2009

...Attitude..dear boy....yes, attitude dear vidi.....it is only a matter of ATTITUDE....nicely scripted poem....

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 October 2009

a situational poem in which both love care and wisdom stand out...very well done

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Heh! ! Heh! ! ......This made me smile! ! ! So very sweet of you.. I think this is a good poem for the budding youth.. At the end of the day, it will all be memories I guess.. I wish the day will come where i will sit with one of my friends and laugh at all the stupid things I have done in past! ! ! lolsss.... May be in 50 years.. You know the case is m'am, we all feel we are the only ones who suffer from problems. Yet, the fact of the matter is that every one has problems! ! ! On the other hand, where is the excitement if there are no challenges.. Life will be dull, mundane voyage if we don't face challenges isn't it? This is a very nice inspirational poem...10 with love Shan

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