Phoenix Poem by Vidi Writes


Rating: 5.0

I wonder why a trustworthy
Seldom trusted!

Is a trusty so enigmatic to you?
Is his honesty a zoo bird?
Is the Candor so tough to trail?
Is his truth a stodgy and you discard?
Is his glory, unbearable to the sight?
Is it your inferiority put on the desk?
Is it the fear, you can never pursue?
Is it you don’t have truth inside to trust upon?

You try to crush him, so the rest are equal! !
He is a phoenix, ever emerges from his own ashes.

Bear him
Follow him
Learn from him
Honor him
Savor the shower of his monsoon.
Dark sky dares to decorate
Stars and Moons on its surface
Else, could anyone see those shines on the sky?


Catrina Heart 12 January 2009

A thought provoking poem written with fine imagery used and nice tone of words...Like any other values, trust is being earned from what you have planted...If you have planted the seed of honesty you'll profit the virtue of trust and respect...Thanks for the wonderful read. A phoenix burns itself and from ashes it comes back to life...10+++

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 January 2009

A most interesting poem. I am not sure I understand it all. But what I did understand was wonderful ! Thoughtful ! GW62

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Raj Nandy 10 January 2009

VIDI, it is a good poem! It gives us food for thought! We must first learn to trust ourselves before we trust others, - and finally God! Thanks for the New Years message sent earlier! - Raj Nandy

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C.R. Clark 10 January 2009

An excellent poem, Vidi. Very often a 'trusty' is not recognized as such from the beginning. Like the phoenix, truth and honesty eventually 'rises from the ashes' to reveal itself. Thanks. A 10. Richard

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Sebastine Humaemo 10 January 2009

pleasant and much true....well penned vidi......lines with full of emotional message.......10+ sebastine

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2009

Ahhh, the proverbial Rise of the Phoenix....This is beautifully wrtitten young lady, with an eloquence of pomp, prowess, and poeticmajesty, as well as it's inveterated philosophic underpinnings...I like it...It you do...and will continue to! F j R 2009

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Rani Turton 15 January 2009

A lot of food for thought, as usual, Vidi. Thanks.

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Deepti Agarwal 14 January 2009

only when the soul comes alive..... lovely one...

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rohit sapra 14 January 2009

This is a very nice poem which talks about characteristics which are unidentified in a person as the qualities which are to be appreciated are seldom appreciated in this worldly world where goodness is turning to be rarest of rare qualities.

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Chitra - 13 January 2009

these words are alimentation for the soul the essence of truth well expressed

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