Thousands of new ventures
Took birth with Expectations
Twisted to fit into self-images
Reflected - own perceptions.
Never compromising
No looking beyond
Want of absolute value
Is this the cause of impediments?
Thousands of failures
Fell on the combat zone
Swept away remnants
Reflected – protuberances
Whether to compromise
How much to look beyond
Extent of approximation acceptable
Will it bring ecstasy?
Compromise calls mutter
No Expiry Date Label
Itching causes abrasion
Where is the elation?
Pick possible over ideal
Essence of endurance as cover
Valor to swallow tears, Optimism the shower
Keep compromises at bay.
Compromise is business
Business is commercial
Ventures aimed at Trade Center?
Then go for compromises.
-vidi-
02-05-08
man when marches by the path as when destined into stream etenal across own time and space still we trudge in the path as often meanders into the wild ever yet not being befuudled by the reeks of shadow yet ephemeral time still tunes for a compromise to save the mirth of own minions but look into the path how it is crystal clear by the raves up ..............lovely poem, when life moves in a plexus of quest and queries as when all mortal no harm in compromising for the welbieng of the stance when requred by the life onto the finale, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
an emotional poem brought out on resist against uncompromisable issues... a question well asked...difficult to compromise with... but one thing, vidi..this poem is really nice! hats off to the thinking behind writing this!
wow Vidi, this is superb. compromising on thevalues you have cherished. it is tough in today's world. to tread the path chosen is like walking on a road less travelled,10 on that.
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vidi ji a fantastic write.. but belongs to the realms of utopia...accross most physical, psychosocial and psychological devides, the fault lines remain as a permanant reminder of upheavel..the world is shrinking and so is the grace and tolerance very well written cheers
A nice observation on compromise. We use to adjust ourself with the situation with a gain motive. Nice poem,10+++
Compromise is mostly essential for a smooth life at different stages, different angles....you've well done above
you ve woven your words, so delicately and crafted a realy nice poem....thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
to live in this surprising world, compromising is part of the 'culture', in order to survive. depends on how we look at it.you write with emo.....good job.