Dear friend, stop me, coz i'm in love...
Dear friend, behold me, coz i'm in pain.
My life is on a new turn...
Everything lost and nothing to earn.
Feel the ache i'm going through...
There is no one i trust, except you.
Many criticise, just a few to forgive...
In this flagitious world, how can i live?
Dear friend, encourage me, coz i've lost the will...
Dear friend, guide me, coz i'm out of my way.
Give me strength, give me a reason...
Help me, i cannot survive in this prison.
In a place surrounded by mean people...
I feel so alone and disregarded.
Accompany me with all your attention...
And get me away from this confusion.
Dear friend, answer me, coz i'm tired of praying...
Dear friend, cherish me, coz i'm filled with obsession.
Comfort me as a true friend...
I give up, now i cannot pretend.
All i have, is a wish...
Dear friend,
In this real world...
Someday you exist.
A passionate poem rich with diction and other poetic attributes.. You may read the poem ON FRIENDSHIP by great poet Kahlil Gibran to relate the thought discussed. Keep writing
I can see u hav a lot of friends here. So despite being pensive it is an excellent fine poem so cheer up younger poet bro. And do coment on mine too.
Friendship is like wine when it becomes old it becomes better. So be patient you will find your true friends. Anyway I liked your poem
great thought...............I wish you'll find your friend very soon :)
a dear friend is the one you can trust. and lucky to have one a good write
: ') amazing...u hve a talent, there might be more but writting is one of them, keep it up :)
I agree.. The world is too selfish and mean.. And all that we need is a true friend on whom we can trust and have faith.. The poem was lovely, keep writing and Sharing.. And sorry for late response :)
An outcry for getting a real dear friend. Great work. Keep it up.
Full of passion and wanting. The last few lines really say it all and make you realize that when you find such a friend, you are truly blessed and should hold onto them tightly!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
how true...a true friend is someone who is stranger yet very close to our heart.........the one who make us feel the pain, happiness, the one who make us feel the seen and unseen......you are really delicate poet sir i really love it thank you for sharing love payal