My Dilapidated Heart And The Stubborn Girl Poem by nimal dunuhinga

My Dilapidated Heart And The Stubborn Girl

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Her ding-dong bells like voice invites me to play hopscotch.
And I just want to explain her,
Dear daughter, I am like your grandfather and I have already hopped over the marked squares in the tattered life and my fragile heart hangs on a string,
If I hop again that would collapse and scatter like dew.

To all my friends in gratitude.

Sunday, January 31, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter,friends,grandfather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 01 February 2010

Good use of imagery and metaphor in this provocative piece. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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