My Dream Car Without A Number Plate Poem by nimal dunuhinga

My Dream Car Without A Number Plate

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My brakes won't applicable to these mockery roads
As it's too old they say.
I keep my both hands on the steering wheel
But it goes to its own consent.
I am scared if it stops on a hill side
As my poor torn wallet doesn't contains
Those tricky notes to refuel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 October 2007

A nightmare penned to perfection. I call them 'can't cope' dreams. Scary. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 10 October 2007

Wonderful use of metaphor in this brief poem. Your originality never disappoints. Take care, my brave friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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