Evening, tender evening...
I could feel the summer breeze
Touching my face, caressing.
Oh, tender breeze...
Together at last...
There was nobody else but us,
Silvery shine of moonlight,
Your sweet glance and my vibrant heart,
Together at last...
Amorous? No, I wasn't amorous.
I just loved you as I still do now
First hug, first kiss...
What a wonderful world it is! !
Oh! I wan' to hear again and again
Sweet words of exultation
You and me, me and you
And your sweet whisper
'I Love You! ! ! ! '
It's a great love poem and you write it from your heart. Your poem's construction is quiet good. You prove tat you are a poetic genius.
First love is like a vaccination that captures a person in its herd and overwhelm the mind and soul of the true lovers....it is indeed a very wonderful feeling and you have written it very splendidly.....10
beautiful poem.......full of your love.......... great work..... ;) .......
Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! Romantic and full of desire. so is a real love experience. if we get a little bit of love we all will go on i life. we have a reason to live. thank you tony
Oh! I wan' to hear again and again Sweet words of exultation You and me, me and you And your sweet whisper 'I Love You! ! ! ! ' veru much romantic and sweetly written poem..you said much in few lines..well done and loved it and let me say..you are doing a good job..a good poet you are 10/10
what a lovely piece this is.. very sweet indeed.. good to read.. you have written this with so much emotion... This is like a scene from a movie.. lovess shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is good. i like your thoughts and words......sis