FeChristie Wong


My First Love Poem - Poem by FeChristie Wong

When God created heaven and he placed those stars above,
I knew right then the star I'd chose would fill my life with love,

The greatest gift bestowed to me is the best received by far,
because that's the day I've met you and realised that you're my star,

I can't forecast what life will hold but there is one thing I know,
That if we keep it watered well our plant of friendship will grow,

You will always be the brightest star in the heavens of my heart,
And I won't despair when dark clouds near for my star shines through the dark.


Comments about My First Love Poem by FeChristie Wong

  • john tiong chunghoo (7/23/2005 10:51:00 AM)


    frist love haiku
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    the yearning
    to look into
    those heartwarming eyes
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  • (7/23/2005 9:09:00 AM)


    The first awakening to love is always the best! Just keep that plant watered and that love will endure the 'tests'! Nice poem. LSP (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 23, 2005



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