My First Poem Poem by Nikunj Sharma

sweet, short, true and touching

words of wisdom. great write.10

So glad that you kept flying on the wings of those 'dead words, ' which is why we have the lovely poem. Thanks.10

HI There, Dylan Thomas wrote a poem at poetry, if i remember rightly....I love you words and the metaphors used to symbolise your thoughts.... very elegant and eloquently written.... will read the others suggested...K

We are the sum total of all that transpires throughout our lives, as is that first feeble attempt at writing poetry. Hopefully, our writing improves as we age, but it's imortrant to remember that first inspiration that sent us on our journey into poetry Very nicely done! Linda :) .

we should always remember where we began :)

Nikunj, your poems fill the whole atmosphere... they have such a nice feel about them plus you are a natural..i wish my first poem were like this.

Nik, this is amazing! ! ! What a great 'first poem.' Your works always amaze me. :)

Lost words but nw found.You now write with a touch of perfection.Foever keep the poetry fire burning.

Ah, those forgotten words, I wonder, so much help you to deliver a lovely one...congrats...and thanks for your comment on my poem too