My Floating Thoughts Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My Floating Thoughts

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Although she is not the moon,
she seems to move like the moon does.
When the night is consistently dark.

She rises just as the moon does,
she appears and smiles like
moon passes between the clouds.

.............Every silent night,
....I sit on my window sill and watch
............the drifting of moon.

I float in the universe of ideas,
among the dim stars, twinkling
when just the two of us are present.

Wednesday, April 19, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pallavi Tripathi 24 April 2023

Very well written

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Richard Wlodarski 23 April 2023

Love the whole poem...especially, the last stanza. Great work, Asim!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 April 2023

Simply wonderful piece Asim

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Anjandev Roy 20 April 2023

Brilliant work.....my friend.....

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Poetic Sky 20 April 2023

Yes me and my thoughts....I float in the universe of ideas, among the dim stars, twinkling when just the two of us are present.

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