My Friends Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Friends

Rating: 5.0


Your thoughts reflect on your face
as charms of dignity and grace
why are you so sweet and lovely?
If you are beautiful, you are mine.
Helpless!
I love all things in the dark that shine.

Your songs touch the hearts
hit my heart, well-targeted darts
why do you sing so sweetly?
If your songs are so sweet, you are mine,
Helpless!
I love all things in the dark that shine.

Your paintings have attractive colors
real flowers! As I feel their odors,
why do you paint fragrant beauty?
If you paint real flowers, you are mine.
Helpless!
I love all things in the dark that shine.

Your poems can hypnotize anyone,
Yes, I am also the enchanted one,
why do you write such touching poems?
If your words twinkle, you are mine.
Helpless!
I love all things in the dark that shine.

You decrease my wrinkles every day,
You are made of gold, not of clay,
why do you glitter like golden ornaments?
If you decorate my face, you are mine.
Helpless!
I love all things in the dark that shine.

Friday, October 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2017

Your poems can hypnotize anyone, Yes, I am also the enchanted one, why do you write such touching poems? If your words twinkle, you are mine. Helpless! I love all things in the dark that shine... .. lovely theme. As you are doing best in every aspect you are my friend. Beautifully crafted and shared.

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Indira Renganathan 23 October 2017

First of all, thank you very much for this shining poem dear friend...all I can say is, Your poems can hypnotize anyone, Yes, I am also the enchanted one, ...thank you Akhtar

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Valsa George 22 October 2017

This is a lovely write Akhtar ji, engendering sweet feelings in all those who happen to read it, also a great encomium on all your poet friends! Sure, friends reduce the wrinkles on one's face! They are a source of eternal delight! Sure 10

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Nosheen Irfan 21 October 2017

Such a lovely tribute to your friends. The repetition of I love all things in the dark that shine is very melodious. Art can touch n capture hearts. Artist friends are a real treasure. A big 10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2017

What a poem! I was enchanted.............................................

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2017

This is the most charitable tribute to some very special friends who are 'made of gold, not of clay'. Thanks for sharing this amazing poem. Helpless! ....Yes, I am.... enchanted I love all things in the dark that shine.

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