My Grandparents Were Married 100 Years Ago Poem by T.R. James Bray

My Grandparents Were Married 100 Years Ago

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I can see your eyes
behind this veil.
But I cannot feel your gaze.
I can hear your words, but your breath
has been suffocated.
The veil sways, against your sound
but the warmth is trapped, away.
The man sold us that veil, at the market
when he heard of our impending nuptials, he said it was
the only way to marry, unite,
and be one, today.
my grandparents had a stove they used
to heat the house
casting light and feeling throughout.
Stoves are not allowed anymore,
too many fires.
Legislated dead, a social contract,
now we watch flames, projected
an attempt to recreate,
to mimic, the original.
Adjusted authenticity.
I know now
you and I are the keepers of the truth.
The terminal ones
who curled on the hearth, as children,
and remember its warmth.
Pulled back the veil,
drank gaze.
Without knowledge of arrangement
ignorant of curation,
Just us
and a need
to free trapped breath.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is in response to the extent that cell phones, social media and the like have consumed the ways in which western society communicates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 06 August 2022

Again, I find in the words of your amazing poetry a truth of such ordinary things, yet seen through the eyes of something beyond it all, a sense of the divine, a sense of touching eternity in the briefest of moments. Mesmerizing.

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Nate Tulay 11 April 2022

A truly beautiful poem... a well penned poem honoring the old age and love... and highlighting the death of politics and the new social contract that is destroying society...

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

Thanks Nate so nice of you to comment.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 April 2022

A beautiful tribute to your grandparents. And what a clever, intriguing and creative method as an indictment to modern technology. Perfect!

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

Thank you Richard, I appreciate the critique. I only wish I was able to match your creativity.

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A poem of love and remembrance. Liked it.

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

So nice of you to say poet friend.

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