My heavy heart is rising like a kite
It floats further and further through the skies
It almost reached the sun
But the warmth melted my heart
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Very profound, LeeAnn. Perhaps Icarus has more to say about depression than hubris. A fantastic verse.
Nice, sorrowful poem. One can read the emotional build up melting away..Top score.
Ever so beautifully and magnificently expressed! .. Beyond #'S and Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The depression is so deep, we can feel it thru your inconsolable and sad verses. Quite impressive! So sorry.