Tuesday, November 28, 2023

My Heavy Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heavy heart is rising like a kite
It floats further and further through the skies
It almost reached the sun
But the warmth melted my heart
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Sandra Feldman 30 November 2023

The depression is so deep, we can feel it thru your inconsolable and sad verses. Quite impressive! So sorry.

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M.J. Lemon 30 November 2023

Very profound, LeeAnn. Perhaps Icarus has more to say about depression than hubris. A fantastic verse.

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Nice, sorrowful poem. One can read the emotional build up melting away..Top score.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 November 2023

Ever so beautifully and magnificently expressed! .. Beyond #'S and Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 November 2023

Ever such sorrow poured into this! ..

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Anjandev Roy 29 November 2023

It almost reached the sun....... brilliant.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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