Peace Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

Peace

Rating: 4.5


Peace
is not the imperfection -finder
of the world. Peace
is the error -mender
of the world.
Peace
is the dream -beauty
of ancient dawns.
Peace
is the vision-dream-choice
of modern noons. Peace
Silences the nightmares of the mind.
Peace
feeds the dreams of the heart

Wednesday, May 12, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 25 May 2010

Well crafted poem on a universal theme with lots of food for thought in it. It sums up what peace is all about in simple terms.10.

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Hans Vr 24 May 2010

Nicely written Imperfection finders are indeed never peaceful

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Julian Yanez 24 May 2010

at the end i love it

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 May 2010

Nice lines about peace. Keep writing, Luzia.

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Preetam Shetty 12 May 2010

Great...simply superb.....

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 26 January 2015

I likes the poem on peace and this is an inspiring one.

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Ayesha Sartawi 02 February 2011

I Like this poem, Good one

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Andrew Bellon 09 June 2010

You move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

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Andrew Bellon 09 June 2010

you move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

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Christina Phan 04 June 2010

its short n true gd job for someone like u very unique 10+

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Lucia Domingos Fula

Lucia Domingos Fula

London Middlesex hospital
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