Lucia Domingos Fula

Rookie (10 july 1994 / London Middlesex hospital)

Peace - Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

Peace
is not the imperfection -finder
of the world. Peace
is the error -mender
of the world.
Peace
is the dream -beauty
of ancient dawns.
Peace
is the vision-dream-choice
of modern noons. Peace
Silences the nightmares of the mind.
Peace
feeds the dreams of the heart


Comments about Peace by Lucia Domingos Fula

  • (1/26/2015 9:45:00 AM)


    I likes the poem on peace and this is an inspiring one. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2011 4:28:00 AM)


    I Like this poem, Good one (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2010 6:34:00 AM)


    You move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2010 6:30:00 AM)


    you move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon (Report) Reply

  • (6/4/2010 5:57:00 AM)


    its short n true gd job for someone like u
    very unique 10+
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  • (6/3/2010 2:33:00 PM)


    this is...amazing. it's so very true and yet so very dreamlike. almost as if you wish you were being honest with the world, but in everyone elses eyes, you are. there is a hope and longing in this that has yet to be matched with some writers.. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2010 4:34:00 PM)


    A wondeful poem, a great one! ! ! ! I liked very much your style here.It's a new and different style for me, and I always love to add something new and different to my own knowledge.I loved mainly the two last lines: 'Silences the nightmares of the mind. Peace feeds the dreams of the heart'.The message is brilliant and I believe that the whole world, mainly nowdays, in the world what we live in, needs to hear a message like this one. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2010 9:25:00 PM)


    Well written & thought profoundly.Adult enough against your age. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2010 4:58:00 PM)


    Well written. Very deep thinking for a young woman. (Report) Reply

  • Matt Mooney (5/25/2010 6:25:00 AM)


    Well crafted poem on a universal theme with lots of food for thought in it. It sums up what peace is all about in simple terms.10. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (5/24/2010 9:12:00 AM)


    Nicely written
    Imperfection finders are indeed never peaceful
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  • (5/24/2010 6:32:00 AM)


    at the end i love it (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/12/2010 1:07:00 PM)


    Nice lines about peace. Keep writing, Luzia. (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 11:36:00 AM)


    Great...simply superb..... (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 11:15:00 AM)


    Well written poem, luzia (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010



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