Lucia Domingos Fula

Rookie (10 july 1994 / London Middlesex hospital)

You Are My Candle - Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

You are my candle, my love!
You are everything to me;
you are the lover of my life!
You are the moon and I’m the stars!
You are everything that I desire.
You are my destiny.
You are my past, present and future.
You are my sun my, everything! You are my Friend, Brother, Father, Sister, Mother.You are my family, my heart is all your to keep within you. Forever I will always be yours and no-one can damage the love that I have for you. You are my soul and no darkness can overcome to depart us. You are my raindropp and I am the sea. I’m so proud that your mine and I’m yours. Every time I feel /touch you my heart smiles and rejoices, but then at the same time its cries because I know once that candle blows away I will never ever feel the same.

Comments about You Are My Candle by Lucia Domingos Fula

  • Prasetya Utama (8/23/2010 11:32:00 PM)

    Nice poem, use candle light as a symbol of the spirit of human life. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/6/2010 3:32:00 AM)

    Love your poem! Light symbolic of a revelator. Used in context with the revelation of love is very good! Good write. (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2010 3:56:00 PM)

    Nice poem Lucia, brava... (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2010 1:22:00 PM)

    Your candle could have an everlasting flame. (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2010 8:58:00 PM)

    Wow! cool poem.
    Such depth
    Such passion
    Keep writing..
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  • (5/25/2010 5:07:00 PM)

    You have such depth in your writing for being so young. I too love candles as light/love and you identify with them as well. wonderful writing. Keep going I want to read on........ (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2010 9:10:00 AM)

    I also love candles: -) Some nice images, I wonder if you might think of separating the poems ending. it reads like prose. (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (5/25/2010 8:18:00 AM)

    But who is 'YOU' Lucy! Is it God or a human beau whom you have perhaps surrendered everything! If it is God, you will get pain but expansion of life will give you ecstassy but if it is human, you have to repent one day since they commonly don't know how to keep promise.

    Thank you to invite me. Well-written poem with passions and sense of freedom you want to enjoy.

    Write more and live with poetry.

    10+(But voting machinary betrays. Keep it in heart.)

    Apoet Bangla
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  • (5/24/2010 4:21:00 AM)

    Very nicely done, Lucia (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 11:39:00 AM)

    You started the on a charming note and finally laid the reality down in a sense very touching.......great job with words (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010

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