My Last Wish Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Last Wish

Rating: 5.0


Collected words that could dance on the beats,
I arranged the words in the flowing lines,
My struggles in the chills and the heats,
As a romance of colorful lights it now shines,
Life was conceived as a mystical fortune,
My ecstatic life danced on a musical tune.

The selfish time froze my tears on my cheeks,
Nobody will look at icicles on a wrinkled face,
But the impressive voice is still at its peaks,
The audience is familiar with all its glace,
I can still dance though not a visible actor,
I can compose new tunes as a music director.

As I am tired of singing again and again,
The same old lyric and the same old tune,
Now retired from dancing again and again,
Welcome with painful tears my misfortune,
Preparing to go to behind the curtains,
A commentator I am who still entertains.

When I am tired at a place behind the screens,
The lights are tuned off for a crazy old man,
I'll sleep there recollecting my golden teens,
My lyric in a melodious song as long as I can,
Sure I'll see many who'll be singing my song,
Even if a fantasy the fantasy is truly strong!

With hopes I came in this unfavorable world,
With hopes shall go to a new probable world.

Wednesday, October 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 November 2019

With hopes I came in this unfavorable world, With hopes shall go to a new probable world. Dear Akhtar Sahab, please do continue to dance on the beats of eloquent words and beautiful verses.....10

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Savita Tyagi 25 October 2019

I hope you keep coming from behind the curtain again and keep composing new tunes. You create a new bond with your readers every time you create a new song to spread your goodwill.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 October 2019

What a wonderful and touching poem. Physical attributes may weaken but as long as the mind is still capable of doing magnificent things, one can be as powerful as a strong man. A poem of great depth beautifully written. Liked the closure lines. It is my ardent hope too that we will be able to dwell in a wonderful and caring world.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2019

Sir ja ji before you go do read my latest just posted BORROWED TIME YOUR POEM WILL NOT BE FORGOTTEN MAKE AS MANY MORE WISHES AS YOU MAY WHILE TIME IS THERE STILL ALLAH'S WILL

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Khalid Saifullah 23 October 2019

A nice fantasy, a lovely poem, beautiful.

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