My Life Poem by Sandhya S.N

My Life

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My life
an unstable restive pendulum
With irregular unmanageable pro-lapse
I hung on its hand
Grouse, sob, whine and sometimes smile
whatsoever
My heart rumbles as a roaring sea
Its tides ebb and fade..
I feel a flood which twirl within
Ha! in-between a soothing peace
Again … Ohh it is back again…
For what?
till when?
I don’t know still...

Sandhya S.N

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 31 August 2009

we don't know in spite of everything...why, when, what of life!

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Shekhar Joshi 14 September 2009

Good meaningful one.....nicely written....but wait have u used irregular for pendulum or life.........

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Maitreyee Joshi 31 August 2009

such a wonderful way of describing the state of mind, untill the mind is enlightened about certain aspects of life.the pendulum that moves to and fro.but yes, it is a part of life.10++

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Ted M 31 August 2009

That's life, the highs and the lows make the happy moments very important.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 31 August 2009

life like the waves...very true..lovely imagery with emotion in this poem...10

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 31 August 2009

A very good contemplative poem full of insight.

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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