My Dreams Poem by Sandhya S.N

My Dreams

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Dreams, my pride adhered to me
Now sways as glowing flames
To burn me, the stolid dry twig
As if to revenge and ridicule

The lovely breeze is not so cool
But makes me shiver and shrilling cool
I feel moon blind even noon
And gets scarred of starry nights

I too remind you of her
With hunched head and broken heart
Who? Or whom did made her cry
Still it seems unknown to me

But I know it as the truth
As day light and the sea
It blind my dreamful eyes
And blew out my glowing flames

Even then I steadfast to stand
And have a quest to ask you dear;
Why did you did so, dear?
What made you think as, so dear?

Colours that roamed I know so bright
And costlier as golden blocks
But dear, don’t you ever felt
My love is brighter and mightier

May be not; But
Life will get sure you the truth
That No one can love you so
As I love you in this life

Sandhya
19.05.2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

Dreamy love poem,10+

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Surya . 04 June 2009

hey.very beatyfull in thoughts and lucid in execution. opening para is wonderfull. 'May be not; But Life will get sure you the truth That No one can love you so As I love you in this life' posted 10 love surya

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Ted M 21 July 2009

wow! Is this a dream? Na! Sounds like a communication. I can picture the flowers, the butterflies in the lovely garden. Dreams are a mirror image of what goes on in the mind!

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Salu Salu 13 June 2009

deep love fathoms fast and fastens hard to remain ever........imperishable.. rgrds for a passionate poem.

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Surya . 08 June 2009

sure when a woman decide on love nothing can change her and no one can measure it.nicely expressed with deep and meaningfull words voted 10 surya

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 June 2009

touching.. feelings vividly expressed very convincing... strong write... thanks for sharing 10+++ l♥ vel♥ ts, maia

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premji premji 08 June 2009

the last four lines prove: love means sacrifice........

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Sandhya S.N

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Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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