I feel that feeble gradient heart
Loving, caring and chilling
Oh! I feel its warmth and cold and
Virile visage with vivid smile
Evermore extol his traits
Yen me towards and unto him
Oh I can’t bear further
Unto death without his love
Roaring mist are his words
Arching life and life flashes
Meant to enlighten men and
Impulse impel to implant love
Being drawn to your love helplessly. Great work. Give you a 9.
vow! beautiful and raring to go. i love your spirit. voted 10 surya
what a feminine touch. what a real passion for life. simple straight words from the heart. regards J T Jayasingh
This is a easy free flowing poem expressing the pull of loved ones in destiny. Time pushing along the make meetings destiny. Beautiful!
Free flowing poem like a young river....it tells the readers what love can be all about. Good one
'Impulse impel to implant love' excellent! ! ! fine words chosen! lovely eloquence! 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet words...such so passionate....beautiful poem....10