Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 68,127 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

My Life Parts........ [short; Silly; Inspired By Lynn Petty's Poem 'a Strong Weaving'] - Poem by Bri Edwards

My life parts are from a junk yard.
That's why some are particularly hard.
But they're stuck together with spittle...
from former quarterback Y. A. Tittle,
so each day i advance.....an additional yard.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

my first poem submited after being 'away' for a month. bri :)

this was part of a comment i left for Lynn, who had been 'away' for about five years! welcome back, Lynn Petty.

Comments about My Life Parts........ [short; Silly; Inspired By Lynn Petty's Poem 'a Strong Weaving'] by Bri Edwards

  • Stuart Munro (3/13/2017 6:41:00 AM)


    Bri, , , , , , , like this, poem, spittle might be not every bodies taste, lol, but used in a poem, it reads great (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (2/5/2016 10:50:00 PM)


    'Stuck together by spittle'......! Jesus cured the blind man of Bethseiba with mud mixed with spittle! ! Why don't you apply some spittle on your eyes to give them better vision! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2016



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