My Lighthouse

Rating: 4.8

A lighthouse stands at Garden Key
Alone, unmoving beside the sea
Comfort the weary, help to the lost
Saving the lives of the tempest tossed

My God My Guidance, from above
Keep me safe and sheltered in Thy love
Dispel my darkness, save my soul
Oh, Heavenly Light

Friday, March 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,light,love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Georgiana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lus. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 March 2018

Georgiana, such a comforting poem??????

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Excellent writing Georgiana 10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

A poem that shows the yearning for spiritual connection with God. It beseech God's guidance in ones life. Beautifully penned but the last line seemed to go out of the flow. The words hang at the end of the stanza.

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Georgie Hilderman 15 March 2018

I added an extra syllable to the last line, and think it flows better

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