My Mind Reminded You……. Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

My Mind Reminded You…….

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Oh! My darling, my beloved darling!
My mind reminded you with those glistened days,
As the truth of the constant sun and the rolling stone

Oh! My darling, did you remember?
I wish to get the dews and clouds for you.
Your lips touched my dry lips at dawn, heavenly feels
I woke up like the daffodil blooms,
I enfolded my arms around you,
Your eyes tame my serene soul.

Now my world is obscured and burnt into ashes-
Love is frozen but sometime melted-
Though my mind still reminded you………

Saturday, November 10, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: ashes,lips
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Oh! My darling, my beloved darling!
My mind reminded you with those glistened days
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 November 2012

I wish to get the dews and clouds for you// so romantic! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 11 November 2012

Lovely romantic poem, it cud thaw frozen luv! Enjoyd readin. Do read mine too.

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Musfiq us shaleheen

Musfiq us shaleheen

Khulna, Bangladesh
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