********my Moon-River Poem by sarwar chowdhury

********my Moon-River

Rating: 4.2


'The great ambition of women is to inspire love'
- Moliere
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Moon
Moonlit
And then moon-river in it

Noon?
No no
Listen soon my love how meet'.

she calls me, rolls me, tells me, bells me, , , , I am runing into the sun....the other galaxy whisper- the lover of the earth within you….the sun smiles…I am burnt but not as burnt to ashes......
......My moon-river comes as I need swim.....my whim bubble..I swim, yea, I swim in love timeless.......all of my ifs and griefs, cheers and tears become breeze of twilight.....It's an evolution of her inspire.

O my moon-river, you know that my whim ignite me to swim.....otherwise I am dead....Otherwise I can not pass through the bridge between body and spirit.

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smiley Hooker 14 July 2009

Very creative and entertaining write. well done! : -)

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Bob Blackwell 04 July 2009

Light reflecting forms sparkiling ripples, moon lit river flows with love for all

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Kesav Easwaran 29 June 2009

Good poem Sarwar...imaginative piece, passonate...nice, seeing you coming back to PH...thanks...10

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Priyanka Bhowmick 28 June 2009

lovely imagination.. well scripted

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Mehreen Mujeeb 28 June 2009

very pretty and smooth. it has an interesting calming mood

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 November 2009

‘It's an evolution of her inspire…’ JUST LIKE MU MU MU* LINE. Excellent and intolerably passionate Sir. Ten ++ Ms. Nivedita UK * Love niv

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Yelena M. 05 September 2009

A great poem with lunar images that impress the reader with vividness and originality, thanks for sharing very much, Sarwar. Y.M.

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Siddharth Singh 16 August 2009

The great ambition of a women is to inspire love.. And the fate of a man is to fall for the trap. Lovely piece. Deserves a 10.

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 August 2009

New. Fresh. lively. incredible. very sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

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Hanna Sara 09 August 2009

really original! ! ! ! i love it.. i give you ten! ! ! 1

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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