My Plan Is A Smashing Success Poem by Chuck Audette

My Plan Is A Smashing Success

Rating: 4.3


Mother's fine china -
a stack of dishes
I couldn't eat with the adults
'twas against her wishes

So I stand at the sink
I will wash her grime
but first, I think
that it's 'break time'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dan Tharp 23 July 2006

Oh yeah! ... this rings a bell. dan

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R H 18 July 2006

Love it Chuck! Superbly delivered piece - I can see the child's mischievious face..}; ~] Justine

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Esther Leclerc 17 July 2006

Destructive, are we then? ! Cute expansion of your poetry in motion piece, Chuck. Glad to see you posting here again! ! ! Est : ]

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Ernestine Northover 17 July 2006

What is this, a 'crash' course in pottery. 'Shattering' experience I should think. Liked this one. Fun too. Love Ernestine XXX

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Anna Russell 17 July 2006

Hee hee. Is it worth the trouble afterwards though? Yeah, 'course it is! Hugs Anna xxx

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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