A Relationship, Of Sorts Poem by Chuck Audette

Charles, Hello again. I love this poem... You make me smile... Please read my 'A Heart Speaks' written back in the late 70's...I think you will get a kick of of this poem. You truly are a terrific writer. Dorothy PMI still not picking up my submissions so I resend them to poemhunter...Enjoying your several entries.

Superb, succinct and to the point! HG: -) xx

I don't know how I didn't see this one before...but it is very wonderful work! ! Hugs, dee

Mmm, the perils of leaving that window open. I find that it's fear that flies in all too often, and love that crawls, sometimes not even knowing it has come in. Oh, you've provoked my most profound response yet! Great poem.

Really good, you say so much in so few words.

Love, a never ending subject, fascinating but painful. Ruthie

Hi Chuck Another 10 for a first class rhyming miniature. Great balance and rythmn in here. All have a moral or point, no matter how short Great Steve

I love this Chuck, it is so clever in its brevity. HG: -) xx

Though brief, this is a witty and clever poem, Chuck. I particularly liked how you made each terse word count, yet made them produce just the right bit of imagery to make this poem very effective. Carl.

This has the brilliance of a Leunig cartoon. What more can I say? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥