Besma Dziri

Gold Star - 6,149 Points (20 / 09 / 1966 / Tunisia)

My Poem - Poem by Besma Dziri

You are
The pulse of my thoughts
The beats of my words
The voice of my inspiring muse
The ink of my very soul
The echo of my despair and hope.
You are my poem
A beauty in my heart
A star on my space
A delight in my universe
A sigh out of my chest
A constant call in my life.
You are my poem
Waking my pen up to light
Making me dream day and night
Showing me paths of inner sight
Giving me the pleasure to write
Bringing me out of my shell with pride.
You are My poem

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/30/2018 11:37:00 PM)

    This Ode to your poems is accepted by those who have the passion to write poetry.+++10

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    Besma Dziri (5/1/2018 3:51:00 AM)

    I do appreciate your insightful feedback. My pleasure, thank you so much.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/31/2018 7:28:00 PM)

    How a poem is created is so nicely and touchingly inscribed here. Poem is the pulse of thoughts, voice of inspiring muse, echo of one's despair and hope, and poem brings dreams and pleasures day and night. Marvelous poem.10 (Report) Reply

    Besma Dziri (4/1/2018 2:31:00 PM)

    Writing poems is my passion! It is a joy, pleasure, relief.. It is healing..
    Thank you very much dear Kumarmani Mahakul.. You genuinely generous.

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (3/21/2018 7:44:00 AM)

    Moreover, the way you have articulated the song of your soul is captivating! I have got by heart your opening few lines: You are/The pulse of my thoughts/The beats of my words/The voice of my inspiring muse/The ink of my very soul/The echo of my despair and hope....Excellent philosophy, very natural expression! It's my pleasure visiting it time and again! Let your pen sparkle in days ahead! (Report) Reply

    Besma Dziri (3/21/2018 11:40:00 AM)

    It is my honour and pleasure dear Dr Dillip to read your kind, appreciative and encouraging comment. Thank you so much! Stay blessed.

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (3/20/2018 8:40:00 AM)

    Wow! What a beautiful poem! You have expressed you inner feelings of being a poet so immaculately! ...A beauty in my heart/A star on my space/A delight in my universe/A sigh out of my chest/A constant call in my life. It's a pleasure reading your poems! (Report) Reply

    Besma Dziri (3/20/2018 4:02:00 PM)

    Bunches of thanks Dr Fillip K Swain. My best regards. I'm deeply humbled by your kind comment.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/19/2018 2:00:00 PM)

    A beauty in my heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Besma Dziri (3/19/2018 7:19:00 PM)

    I'm glad you read and enjoyed my poem. Deeply humbled and thankful.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    so lovely poem.. welcome...10

    Upon arrival

    I used to feel
    At free will
    That occupied space in head
    It is well received and read

    I am not sure
    What to assure
    In return
    For love’s turn

    But it is fact
    That is seen in my each act
    You are very much there
    With love to bear

    I am confident
    At present
    That love shall mushroom
    And find enough of room

    I shall be waiting
    And dating
    Till you come with concrete proposal
    I shall celebrate it upon arrival

    I am confident
    At present
    That love shall mushroom
    And find enough of room

    I shall be waiting
    And dating
    Till you come with concrete proposal
    I shall celebrate it upon arrival
    (Report) Reply

    Besma Dziri (3/19/2018 7:22:00 PM)

    I'm deeply sorry for being so much late to thank you.I do appreciate your kind comment and special welcome. Bunches of thanks.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

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