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Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Bathe Your Heart

Rating: 4.9
R-ays above bathe your heart,
O-ctober eleventh morn;
N-ew dawn has just broken
A-t the day when you were born.
L-et the beacon bathe your heart,
Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too;
N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.

R-adiant glows that shine
A-re making a fresh fine start;
N-either dusk nor twilight,
A-llow the sun to bathe
Y-our heart.
Bernard F. Asuncion
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Selected as POEM OF THE DAY (October 14,2016)by POEMHUNTER ❤️❤️❤️
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COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020
Such a beautiful composition! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece!
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Rajendran Muthiah 17 April 2020
Acrostic song Is difficult to write. But the poet has chosen the birth day to write it with ease. Excellent.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 March 2020
A radiantly lovely birthday tribute, Bernard. A joy to read.
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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019
Warm words embalming the heart of the reader! Sweet and lovely!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019
R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart.........touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10
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Anjandev Roy 29 May 2019
Sublime poem. It pleases my heart. Thank u. anjandev roy.
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Mahtab Bangalee 21 April 2019
beautiful acrostic poem- L-et the beacon bathe your heart, Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too; N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.///
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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2019
A great acrostic my friend! I admire your sparkling poetic expression.....................10
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019
Thanks, Dillip for the priceless feedback????
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Pallab Chaudhury 20 March 2019
A beautiful acrostic poem... I liked the write-up.. Thanks for the poem being shared... pc
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019
Thanks, Pallab for the marvelous message ????
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Valsa George 16 March 2019
We are not meant to stay in dusk's dim light! We are to stay in broad daylight... bright and luminous. That light comes from above! A beautiful Birthday wish in acrostic style and an inspiring write! A sure 10
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019
Thanks, dear Ma’am Valsa for the heartwarming and inspiring words????
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