Bernard F. Asuncion

Gold Star - 483,487 Points (July 30,1967 / Subic, Philippines)

Bathe Your Heart - Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

R-ays above bathe your heart,
O-ctober eleventh morn;
N-ew dawn has just broken
A-t the day when you were born.
L-et the beacon bathe your heart,
Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too;
N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.

R-adiant glows that shine
A-re making a fresh fine start;
N-either dusk nor twilight,
A-llow the sun to bathe
Y-our heart.

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Bathe Your Heart by Bernard F. Asuncion

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/14/2019 7:13:00 PM)

    R-adiant glows that shine
    A-re making a fresh fine start;
    N-either dusk nor twilight,
    A-llow the sun to bathe
    Y-our heart.........touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10
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  • (5/29/2019 1:23:00 PM)

    Sublime poem. It pleases my heart. Thank u. anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (4/21/2019 12:40:00 AM)

    beautiful acrostic poem-
    L-et the beacon bathe your heart,
    Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too;
    N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.///
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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (4/20/2019 12:58:00 AM)

    A great acrostic my friend! I admire your sparkling poetic expression.....................10 (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:53:00 AM)

    Thanks, Dillip for the priceless feedback🙏🙏

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  • Pallab Chaudhury (3/20/2019 1:56:00 AM)

    A beautiful acrostic poem... I liked the write-up..
    Thanks for the poem being shared...
    pc
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:52:00 AM)

    Thanks, Pallab for the marvelous message 🙏🙏

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  • Valsa George (3/16/2019 1:16:00 AM)

    We are not meant to stay in dusk's dim light! We are to stay in broad daylight... bright and luminous. That light comes from above! A beautiful Birthday wish in acrostic style and an inspiring write! A sure 10 (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:48:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear Ma’am Valsa for the heartwarming and inspiring words🙏🙏

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (2/6/2019 1:29:00 AM)

    Lovely acrostic indeed. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:46:00 AM)

    Thanks, sir Aniruddha for the precious comment 🙏🙏

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  • Richard D Remler (1/26/2019 12:57:00 AM)

    an uplifting write, much enjoyed. A fun read. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:45:00 AM)

    Thanks, Richard for the warm words of inspiration 🙏🙏

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  • Diane Junio Montemayor (1/20/2019 8:19:00 AM)

    Dear Sir Bernard,

    Rays above bathe your heart
    It says remain in God's love

    Sincerely,
    Diane
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:43:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear ate Diane for the precise remark🙏🙏

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  • Jennifer Birchall (1/15/2019 2:00:00 PM)

    A wonderfully written Acrostic Bernard. (Report)Reply

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  • Jennifer Birchall (1/15/2019 1:45:00 PM)

    I love to read your acrostic poetry Bernard, so beautifully written. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:41:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear Ma’am Jenny for the top-of-the-line comment🙏🙏

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  • Britte Ninad (1/10/2019 11:12:00 PM)

    beautifully written L-et the (divine) beacon bathe your heart, (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:34:00 AM)

    Thanks, Britte for the beautiful words🙏🙏

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/4/2019 1:00:00 AM)

    Exceptional piece of work, dear Bernie.
    Keep it up......................
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/3/2019 12:45:00 AM)

    R-adiant glows that shine
    A-re making a fresh fine start;
    N-either dusk nor twilight,
    A-llow the sun to bathe
    Y-our heart.

    A marvelous acrostic, dear Bernie.............................
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/1/2019 4:56:00 PM)

    R-ays above bathe your heart,
    O-ctober eleventh morn;
    N-ew dawn has just broken
    A-t the day when you were born.
    L-et the beacon bathe your heart,
    Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too;
    N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.

    This is truly amazing, dear Bernard.......................
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(4/20/2019 2:31:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear Cheryl for the lovely message🙏🙏

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:49:00 PM)

    A well penned masterpiece, Bernard❤️❤️❤️ (Report)Reply

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:47:00 PM)

    An inspiring touching acrostic, Bernard❤️❤️❤️ (Report)Reply

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/30/2018 4:24:00 PM)

    A heartwarming and wonderful poem, Bernard.
    I love the way you contruct this amazing acrostic❤️❤️❤️
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/27/2018 12:17:00 AM)

    A marvelous acrostic which was selected poem of the day in October 14,2016............ (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(12/27/2018 6:26:00 PM)

    Thanks, for the inspiring comment, Cheryl..................................

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  • Luke Hobbs (12/15/2018 7:20:00 PM)

    Excellent Acrostic. Well done, sir! (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(12/15/2018 7:52:00 PM)

    Thanks, Luke for adding awesome comment to this piece🤓🤓🤓🙏🙏🙏

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 13, 2018


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