Bathe Your Heart Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Bathe Your Heart

Rating: 4.9


R-ays above bathe your heart,
O-ctober eleventh morn;
N-ew dawn has just broken
A-t the day when you were born.
L-et the beacon bathe your heart,
Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too;
N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.

R-adiant glows that shine
A-re making a fresh fine start;
N-either dusk nor twilight,
A-llow the sun to bathe
Y-our heart.

Bathe Your Heart
Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Selected as POEM OF THE DAY (October 14,2016)by POEMHUNTER ❤️❤️❤️
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 14 October 2016

Allow the sun to bathe your heart. I really like that phrase. Congratulations on poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2016

Thanks, Sir Kim.... It's really surprising...... Feel so glad.....

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Isabella Campos 14 October 2016

Acrostic style is hard! So you conveyed a meaningful message with a few words.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2016

Thanks, Ma'am Isabella.... I feel the comfort brought by your words of mirth....

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Ramesh Rai 17 April 2017

Purification of heart is more important than cleanliness of body. Nice thought. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020

Such a beautiful composition! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece!

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 April 2020

Acrostic song Is difficult to write. But the poet has chosen the birth day to write it with ease. Excellent.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 March 2020

A radiantly lovely birthday tribute, Bernard. A joy to read.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019

Warm words embalming the heart of the reader! Sweet and lovely!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart.........touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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