poet Herbert Nehrlich

Herbert Nehrlich

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My Poems (Haiku)

I do consider
my poems as my children
I shall not share them.

Those of poor manners
just stay away you wankers
you are not welcome.

It's strictly envy
you know that you're inferior,
consumed by hatred.

To me you're nothing
a windbag full of flatus
and diarrhoea.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 4, 2006

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Comments about My Poems (Haiku) by Herbert Nehrlich

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (1/4/2006 7:51:00 PM)

    Ignore who, Mary?
    Oh....you mean the 'sediments'?
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  • Mary Nagy (1/4/2006 7:43:00 PM)

    Best to just ignore them Herbert.....I know it is frustrating. You get 10 from me! :)

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  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (1/4/2006 4:27:00 AM)

    You are correct, Liz. That is ONE Haiku.
    If you write several then you have more than one Haiku.
    And all my Haikus are 5-7-5
    H

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  • Liz Munro (1/4/2006 3:13:00 AM)

    Isn't a haiku 5-7-5 and one stanza?
    I don't know Sally tried to explain them to me
    but I still don't quite get them.
    Love the sediments esp 'It's strictly envy
    you know that you're inferior'
    8/10 'cos I don't quite get haiku
    Liz.

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