Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, November 3, 2018

My Ronnell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Excuse me, Ma'am. You seem to be alone.
Do you mind if I sit here?
I could use some company myself.
Can I buy you a beer?
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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Update: Ronnell passed away today after a lingering illness. My sister, one of her best friends, went to visit her, which she had been doing daily, and got there just minutes after she had died.

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Jayne Davies 05 February 2022

Really enjoyed reading!

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Thanks for commenting, Jayne.

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Bharati Nayak 04 February 2022

You should post your songs on youtube, so that we can watch.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Sorry, Bharati. I don't know anything about posting to YouTube. Thanks for commenting.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 04 February 2022

Now I am going to find and read your other poem, 'Singing with Willie Nelson'. Absent-minded me can't remember if he has read it or not.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2022

Typos: I would love to have. I take this wonderful poem to my favorite.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Thank you, Dillip.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2022

A fascinating poem that has enormous power to refresh readers mind. The last line, 'I must write you a song' is an admirable resolution of an artist. I would love to that poem the poet has written about the country singer Willie Nelson. Lovely work...5 stars.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Thank you for the multiple comments, Dillip.

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Bharati Nayak 04 February 2022

Such a beautiful poem with an interesting story! I enjoyed every bit of it.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Thank you, Bharati.

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Kim Barney 04 February 2022

In the poet's notes it says that my poem about Willie Nelson was not on Poem Hunter yet, so don't bother looking for it. It is NOW posted, and has been for quite some time. It's called 'Singing with Willie Nelson'.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 27 April 2021

Great story and poet's notes. Great POEM, also!

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Kim Barney 30 December 2024

Thanks, Ron..

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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