My Silent Music Poem by Cigeng Zhang

My Silent Music

Rating: 4.7


my silent music
rosy and bright
rolling inside of me
into my cloudy heart

*for my dad

My Silent Music
Wednesday, April 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 22 January 2017

the music within may define our dancesteps with eternity

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 August 2016

Inside of me. Thanks for sharing.

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Cigeng Zhang 04 August 2016

Thank you for reading my work. Best wishes ~

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Daniel Brick 18 October 2015

This poem is made up of two contradictions which are in some mysterious not contradictions after all: the first is Silent Music - everyone knows music is noise, it can't be silent; Then within your inner self it is rosy and bright but wait the heart is described as cloudy. And I sense there is a third apparent contradiction not mentioned and that it has to do with the one this poem is given to - your Dad. But since you are silent about this, I will withdraw into silence as well. This poem has a charming tenderness.

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Cigeng Zhang 21 October 2015

I am so glad you always give me such detailed comment. Thank you!

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Kwai Chee Low 29 April 2015

A lovely poem, short and sweet; happy and bitter! Thank you for sharing, Cigeng.

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Cigeng Zhang 29 April 2015

Thank you Kwai Chee for your comment. Best wishes

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