My Chopsticks Poem by Cigeng Zhang

My Chopsticks

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I've bought a pair of bamboo chopsticks
There is a small painting on the chopsticks
The man in the painting is much like him
with a fishing pole - oh I once met him in his poem

He said he was not a poet
but a fisherman staying with salty light
Fish was his moving poem
Sea built him a boundless home

Now he is truly on my chopsticks
I catch him without fish hooks
The chopsticks stop in my hand
I think of him, his poem - my long lost friend...

Sunday, April 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 22 January 2017

'but a fisherman staying with salty light' these are the rewards of time spent watching waiting catching food to eat, catching the infinite wonder of changing light near water through seasons weather changes

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Roseann Shawiak 03 June 2016

Very alluring and mysterious, wondering how you first met this man and heard his poem, how did his picture somehow appear on your chopsticks, peaks my curiosity, wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Daniel Brick 25 April 2016

This is a very real fantasy, which might sound contradictory but your poem shows it's true. Your poem strikes me as anThe elusive person is first a picture on chopsticks, becomes the emory of someone you fleetingly encounteredd account ot the elusive nature of things or people we see only briefly but imagine so many possibilities. The figure on the chopsticks reminds you of someone who appeared in one of his own poems, and that poetic figure is very compelling. He is so real to your imagination, he will certainly be embodied in someone you meet in the real world. I had a teacher who told us, NOTHING CAN BE REAL WHICH HAS NOT FIRST BEEN IMAGINED. You have done this imaginative work in this smiling, upbeat, happy poem.

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Cigeng Zhang 28 April 2016

Thank you very much dear Daniel for your vivid comment. NOTHING CAN BE REAL WHICH HAS NOT FIRST BEEN IMAGINED. - a very good saying. I like it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 April 2016

Wonderfully paraphrased natural phenomenon wrapped in to a poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Cigeng Zhang 28 April 2016

Dear Jayatissa, thank you very much for your encouraging comment.

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Cigeng Zhang 28 April 2016

Dear Jayatissa, thank you very much for your encouraging comment on my work.

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