Temple Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Temple

Rating: 4.5


I open my window
You, on my opposite side
Also open your window

My lips slightly open
Tasty like chardonnay
Cherries climb the treetops

The visitor is not you
A day in early June
Wrapped in rice dumpling

Straw rain cape is olive green
Cicadas not yet wake up
A lifelike status set on a roof
Which ditty comes first from afar?

Cigeng Zhang 15 Aug 2014

Thursday, August 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 August 2014

status.........is this supposed to be statues? thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Cigeng Zhang 14 August 2014

Thank you Bri for your sharing. The Temple, in my mind, has more meanings.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 December 2014

'Tasty like chardonnay' - Loved it! 'A lifelike status set on a roof Which ditty comes first from afar? ' - A beautiful expression! Over all, a nice poem with a sweet fragrance that the readers' minds would waft far and near.

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Daniel Brick 23 August 2016

This is a Poem of Beginnings, and there are many more things beginning than I had imagined previously. You are like the director on a movie set cuing things for their moment of appearance. There a sequence that is observed so you are especially alert, not a trace of sleepiness, you're fully engaged in observing everything under the risen sun. Unlike a religious temple which involves withdrawing from the bustling world, your temple is that bustling world and you plunge into the thick of the activity.

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Christopher Tye 22 July 2016

Great poem and a nice read. Our hearts are temples to the loves of our lives.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 July 2016

Love and dreams! ! To see the ways of life. Nice work.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 April 2016

lifelike status set on a roof, good one..

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C. P. Sharma 13 February 2016

An awesome crush with Nature in the divine ambiance of worshiping mind.

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