I open my window
You, on my opposite side
Also open your window
My lips slightly open
Tasty like chardonnay
Cherries climb the treetops
The visitor is not you
A day in early June
Wrapped in rice dumpling
Straw rain cape is olive green
Cicadas not yet wake up
A lifelike status set on a roof
Which ditty comes first from afar?
Cigeng Zhang 15 Aug 2014
Thank you Bri for your sharing. The Temple, in my mind, has more meanings.
'Tasty like chardonnay' - Loved it! 'A lifelike status set on a roof Which ditty comes first from afar? ' - A beautiful expression! Over all, a nice poem with a sweet fragrance that the readers' minds would waft far and near.
This is a Poem of Beginnings, and there are many more things beginning than I had imagined previously. You are like the director on a movie set cuing things for their moment of appearance. There a sequence that is observed so you are especially alert, not a trace of sleepiness, you're fully engaged in observing everything under the risen sun. Unlike a religious temple which involves withdrawing from the bustling world, your temple is that bustling world and you plunge into the thick of the activity.
Great poem and a nice read. Our hearts are temples to the loves of our lives.
An awesome crush with Nature in the divine ambiance of worshiping mind.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
status.........is this supposed to be statues? thanks for sharing. bri :)