My Special Someone...A Triolet Poem Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

My Special Someone...A Triolet Poem



My special someone
Throws kisses to the wind's sweet song
And rides life's jaunty waves
My special adored one
Oh, my, I his sweet kiss crave
In longing to him I sing lone nights long
My ever devoted one
He says our love will never 'er go wrong.


(first attempt)

Sunday, October 18, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kerry O'Connor 18 October 2009

This is really excellent for a first attempt. Form poems require much discipline but this one seems to have been penned with ease.

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