My Stone Poem by Chris Mallia

My Stone

Rating: 5.0


Was walking by the sea with a heavy heart
Trying to figure myself out
The air was cool, the stars were bright
My heart was cold, hurt and tight

Suddenly I broke down and began to cry
Looking at the waves, as they rolled and died
Trying to find answers which will never come
God, Oh God, set me free, don't leave me tied

I picked up a pebble, big and round
It was also heavy, harsh and hard
Looked at its shape, feeling its weight
Same as my stone deeply buried in my heart

Held it in my hands for a few minutes more
Realizing what to do, I let out a sigh
With a swift run and a huge throw
The pebble flew far, long and high

Landing in the sea, it sank to the bottom
Finally was at peace, as there was no tomorrow
My heart lifted and its spirit rose
For with that pebble, I threw my sorrow

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in 2007, this was a time when I need to learn about forgiving myself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 26 September 2008

rise the new you. i love sea myself that i wrote a lot of my poems by the sea. lovely poem. i hope that it is that easy to let go. hmmm... good luck.md.

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rajagopal haran 07 December 2007

beautifully written. enjoyed reading; pl keep writing

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Sonny Rainshine 27 November 2007

Creative and original use of a beach pebble as a metaphor for heaviness of heart, and casting the stone out to represent unburdening oneself. Nice, sincere poem. Good work. Look forward to reading more of yours.

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Emancipation Planz 27 November 2007

Lovely share... welcome to PH. Keep penning them One Peace at a time

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