My Struggle To Rise Against The Gravity Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You called it String and i call it Fate, Destiny and we all are in a state of wonder as to who is holding it and what is the purpose? Intriguing poetry.

Surrounded by wrong people we loose many opportunities, well said.

I am reminded of a philosophical poem by Khalil Jibran, the river cannot go back...I see same philosophy in your poem. Well Done.

Great philosophical poem. Very innovative. A different style but very well written.

Word choice, structure, and depth of thought---creates awesome poetry, my friend. A galaxy of stars for this! !

Part 2. You are awesome at word choices to create tone and define direction.

I like the structure of this work--I like it when poets use shapes to help create a mood, an ideological pyramid, to aid the word choice.

I totall agree with Nosheen Total innovative Bravo! ! !

Thought-provoking piece.... written in an unusual way.., enjoyed....thank u, dear friend...