My Struggle To Rise Against The Gravity Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Great philosophical poem. Very innovative. A different style but very well written.

I am reminded of a philosophical poem by Khalil Jibran, the river cannot go back...I see same philosophy in your poem. Well Done.

Surrounded by wrong people we loose many opportunities, well said.

You called it String and i call it Fate, Destiny and we all are in a state of wonder as to who is holding it and what is the purpose? Intriguing poetry.

Word choice, structure, and depth of thought---creates awesome poetry, my friend. A galaxy of stars for this! !

Part 2. You are awesome at word choices to create tone and define direction.

I like the structure of this work--I like it when poets use shapes to help create a mood, an ideological pyramid, to aid the word choice.

I totall agree with Nosheen Total innovative Bravo! ! !

Thought-provoking piece.... written in an unusual way.., enjoyed....thank u, dear friend...