My Suicide Poem by Min Sia

My Suicide

Rating: 5.0


Coldest wind touches me
Bracing me 'till warmth release
Tears of chained vow
White flowers all around

The freedom awaits me
Sunrise turned into blood
This air that I breathe
Soon will never be fresh

My wound cries for the grave
I cry for the deliverance
Death before my eyes
Your death, my suicide

Friday, October 17, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 07 January 2009

dear min, in this world, nothing is fresh except death.... well penned... 10 votes

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Kesav Easwaran 24 December 2008

...'This air that I breathe Soon will never be fresh'... Beautiful line...adds more severity to the situation you create in this write...strong scented, strong imagined write...ten for you, Min

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Tsira Goge 12 December 2008

Remarkably, beautiful minor....10.. thank you for sharing, Min best wishes Tsira

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rohit sapra 16 November 2008

This poem is nicely written and life surely can be like a chain where it becomes hard to breathe though a creative soul always finds the creative way to let emotions flow.

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Reshma Ramesh 09 November 2008

ohhhhhhh! ! mam' you are one talented lady.....well penned!

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