My Lies Poem by Min Sia

My Lies

Rating: 4.6


I feel the beauty of the world...
..the restless wind...
..the splashes of spring water...
..the gigantic views of mountain...

I feel the revolving world...
..the warm sensation of their smiles...
..the breeze of love throughout my body...
..the immeasurable touch of their hands...

I feel my existence...
..the achievements of my essence...
..the abstraction of my choices...
..the hope of fullness...

Yes, all the results and consequences
I was lost and now pursuing the end
Sealed with lies all within
Who can decide what I want to dream?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 10 November 2008

only you can decide to reach that dream by your determination... thoughts provoking..nice write....A10 Read my poem ' Determination ' and you will know what is all about.... Ency Bearis

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 February 2009

a poem with great insight...feeling comfortable and safe amidst all choas is like being in god's lap

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Kesav Easwaran 04 January 2009

nobody...even you can't decide...dreams come floating by themselves irrespective of our states of mind... just like this one you write about! you lie about! good write, Min...insightful...10

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Naru Kaede 04 December 2008

Wowwowowowow, , , I don't know this poem is so great, , , Love it much, , , but you have a dream now, don't you? ? (^_^) v Fighting...! ! ! Regards, Naru Kaede,

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rohit sapra 15 November 2008

This is a great poem. So much depth this poem has added with it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 November 2008

Ammmmmazing flow here! Matured composition! ...10++

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