My Sweet, Lonely, Little, World Poem by Jasbir Chatterjee
My Sweet, Lonely, Little, World
Come, step
into my sweet, lonely little world!
Hand in hand,
We shall run across the cliffs
against which my emotions crash,
Fly through the capricious clouds
Through which my wild fancies fly,
Swim in the deep waters of the sea
in which lie buried the secrets of my heart,
Sing and dance
to the music of the swaying plants and the whistling winds,
and when weary and hungry,
eat the Forbidden Fruit.........
But perhaps you would wish to run away,
Perhaps you have your own sweet, lonely little world......
But first,
Come, step
into my sweet, lonely little world!
You have portrayed your 'sweet, lonely little world' so beautifully, and thanks for taking us around. It's a sweet poem that I liked to read. 'Fly through the capricious clouds Through which my wild fancies fly, Swim in the deep waters of the sea in which lie buried the secrets of my heart, ' These lines are really beautiful.
A lonely world is sometimes very peaceful but how long? A day comes it does not remain lonely. A nice poem.
Of course, Sonali. With you in it, it is no longer lonely, but it is sweeter.
Fly through the capricious clouds Through which my wild fancies fly, Swim in the deep waters of the sea in which lie buried the secrets of my heart, ....lofty expression. Loved the use of hyperbole. Top score!
Perhaps if I cherish WILD FANCIES, SECRETS, and EMOTIONS as you do, I too will find sweetness in my own lonely world.// On the outside you seemed a demure Mathematics student, but inside were heights of fancy, depths full of secrets, and precarious cliffs that overlooked crashing tides.
It is a beautiful poem on loneliness having stunning and thrilling expression. The way of presentation and penmanship is highly appreciated. Thanks for sharing.
This is wonderful little world created by the poet where she has carefully curated her loneliness, emotions, fancies and the secrets of her heart. It's so lovely to have a peep into this world. Thanks. Come, step.... into my sweet, lonely little world! and when weary and hungry, eat the Forbidden Fruit.........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/9/2024 5:12:14 PM # 1.0.0
This poem reads so well and honest that I feel like reading it again and again. The theme is a common reference to most of us but the imagery and style are very special and pronounced. ....10....