My Valentine! Poem by Neela Nath Das

My Valentine!

Rating: 5.0


I'm sunk under the
shadowy thought of green
not of envy, but of
nature's serene scene,
a canvas never fades,
and love sublime!
I'm nature's daughter
and nature's valentine!
I drink solitude
of Birch, Oak and Pine.
Don't pull my hands,
you are not mine.
Yes, I know, you care
little my tender-self,
what's unfair, you treat as fair.
But, nature gives me help.
And you? You snatch my peace,
tearing me and my soul
into thousand piece.
Tell me what can I do
except hugging the woodlands
and sky-kissing hills and sky?
Be as nature, and take my waiting hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 February 2014

I'm nature's daughter and nature's valentine! That is the ultimate. Hope someone will be able to imitate nature.

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Rajesh Thankappan 13 February 2014

Nature's valentine! A fascinating thought! But life has its own vagaries.

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Neela Nath Das 13 February 2014

Geetha and Tiku thanks a lot for lovely comments.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 February 2014

Wow.......A fantastic write. Yes, nature gives us a lot..That's the beauty of nature which attracts one to it, like Valentine. Loved reading it Neela. Keep writing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 February 2014

what a wonderful drop Neela! ! if we all love nature as you do the devastation will stop.thanks for sharing.

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Rahul Sharma 23 February 2014

Twilight style! ! wah, wonderfully written! valentine within! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 17 February 2014

i like the fascinating comment of Tiku. wonderful comment.this is one type of great valentine.

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Ramesh Rai 17 February 2014

i like the fascinating comment of Tiku. wonderful comment.this is one type of great valentine.

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Valsa George 15 February 2014

I'm nature's daughter and nature's valentine! I drink solitude I love these lines.... Yes, Nature can give us the comfort which so many other things can't give! ! This valentine poem is unique in its own way! !

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Sandra Feldman 15 February 2014

What better love have you? For Nature loves us too. This is and unusually beautiful and extremely fantastic, original and far-reaching poem. Great sensations Thanks!

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