My Wife Poem by Bichitra Anand

My Wife

Rating: 5.0


My wife

I could discover
Nothing in my wife
Except some pure
Weaknesses of my life.

Beloved was once what
Merely a sharp knife
Stabbing at lib on my heart
Blowing her beautiful Fife.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 19 September 2017

Except some pure weaknesses of own life. Nice line. Thanks poet. 10++

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 19 September 2017

It is so nice of you.Thanks.

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Bichitra Anand 19 September 2017

I convey my thanks for your comments.

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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings written in persuasive expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Bichitra.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 January 2019

Weakness of my life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2018

I could discover Nothing in my wife Except some pure Weaknesses of my life..........impressive lines with nice theme. It is really a beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Unknown 14 December 2017

Practical .

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Jolly S Lee 16 November 2017

ବେଆଉଟିଫୁଲ ଆଣ୍ଡ ଇ like it.

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