My Words Wont Stay Poem by Nikunj Sharma

My Words Wont Stay

Rating: 4.2


In sands of time yesterday;
I wrote some words;
Now fading away.

Their meanings were deep
But to your heights they couldn't creep;
Can you wish for them?
For them Can u pray?
Make my words always stay...

The rocks I itched with my hand;
Withered away and merged in sand.
The words on them too melted away;
From stone to sand unfortunately;
The traffic goes only one way.

I saw them on sand
And in the water flowing away;
My words cradled on waves heart;
Waved at me and said - hey
I know it was your magic
For if, you didn't pray
My words would have witherd too
Without you, they won't stay...

Thursday, July 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

your words are engraved on my memoryl! ! ! well penned! ! ! your words are very imaginative and their effect touch my soul! ! ! 10/10

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Christina Phan 20 July 2009

ur words will always stay in ur heart no matter wht is unless u forge it kept it up 10++

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Anjali Sinha 16 July 2009

your words will always stay however deep the meaning is -10 anjali

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Deborah Cromer 09 July 2009

'The traffic only goes one way'? ? ? I don't understand. What is traffic doing in your poem? Maybe I don't understand what you are trying to get across, but traffic is out of place here. Water, sand, stones, and then boom! Traffic. I see and hear cars and trucks, highways and roads. Can you find another word to mean what you want? Or not? You asked me to give you my opinion. :) DC

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2009

Is that lacking confidence? ...wish and pray for you....10++

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