My Zest Poem by ramesh rai

My Zest



I wanted to keep
long hair and long beard

Primarily, my mom never wanted
now my soul partner never wants
basically both are formed
of same nature, as eloquent
as dawn and as dusk.

Sunday, September 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 September 2014

Eat to your own taste and dress for other's taste they say. How one looks is a concern for others. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2014

As dawn and as dusk.....lovely poem of few line expresses more exploring things.

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