ramesh rai

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If God Asks Me - Poem by ramesh rai

If God asks me
what do you want?

Certainly, I shall say
bestow me with the divine power
to create more and more
beautiful poems
that speaks the language
of all creatures
that expresses the mirth
of a blooming flower
that expresses the grief
of a withering flower
that expresses the pains and pleasures
of an ant working tough
for foster of baby ant
that expresses restless toils
of stars and planets
to keep the pace of nature
always in existence

If God asks me
about my requirement
i shall say
give me bread to feed my family
and to my friend and foe
who gave me love and lesson
give me shelter under your arms
and a sweet home to reside
under the roof of your divine soul

But must not i forget
to mention the names
who creates poem in praise of His divine glory and His infinite creation
despite of their destitute

And lo! my name be laid all the rest.


Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about If God Asks Me by ramesh rai

  • Patricia Grantham (9/11/2017 4:59:00 AM)

    Your poem is very beautiful and your expectations are admirable. Moving and encouraging. (Report) Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (9/2/2017 5:05:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. This is what every poet would want from God. It is a sobering experience when that creative power slips away from us. God gives and God takes. And it is certainly is satisfying to see others moving on that path spreading the joy of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/23/2016 7:32:00 AM)

    Verily, a lovely write
    Loved reading it
    Added to my favorite list.....10
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (4/19/2016 5:28:00 AM)

    Good imagination, may happen a day,
    Very nice, thank you.
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  • Susan Williams (3/31/2016 3:38:00 PM)

    This poem utterly charmed me! ! ! Praises for speaking of the lowliest creatures of God's creation- -ants. You understand the importance of every creature which I have to admit I hadn't thought of the magnificence of ants before! These lines especially drew me- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -]
    that speaks the language
    of all creatures
    that expresses the mirth
    of a blooming flower
    that expresses the grief
    of a withering flower
    that expresses the pains and pleasures
    of an ant working tough
    for foster of baby ant
    (Report) Reply

  • Mary Angela Douglas (3/19/2016 1:52:00 PM)

    Your poem is a beautiful, heartfelt prayer. Surely God heard you. What more can a poet dream of than to be heard by God in His kindness and beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/5/2016 9:36:00 AM)

    A powerful and positive prayer that is both creative and compelling! (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (12/6/2015 10:23:00 PM)

    I wish I had read it day before
    last night God asked me
    who is RR
    I said Give me time I will let you know

    Now i will share your poem
    with HIM also
    (Report) Reply

  • Sranisha Francis (9/18/2015 5:00:00 PM)

    If God asks me
    what do you want? I Say, YOU you Oh My Lord.
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/13/2015 11:57:00 AM)

    Wonderfully expressed answer. You take the freedom to tell God what you desire, very humbly and succinctly. I love the use of your words when you pen.. Love your thoughts, Ramesh Raiii Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (7/24/2015 8:02:00 PM)

    Very inspiring write and truly human views, realizing needs as well as wants. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/11/2015 5:56:00 AM)

    wow... If others will be asked by God they might mention a lot of other things..but you.. you want simple things...and you ask first guidance for poem writing.. SALUTE
    poems can inspire people
    poems can motivate
    poems bring smiles

    Thank you for your poem
    (Report) Reply

  • Tushar Ray (2/27/2015 10:15:00 PM)

    I love your poem expressing your noble desires to the Almighty. Thank you poet Rai. (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2015 9:52:00 PM)

    Beautifully expressed answer telling God what you desire, very humbly and succinctly worded. Love your thoughts, Ramesh. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (12/11/2014 5:34:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem asking God the Creator to bestow
    upon you great things. We have not because we ask not. A
    very heartfelt write.
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  • Amitava Sur (8/13/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    A very noble wish is expressed to make a profound poet to serve the mankind by writing poems to give them ed messages with values. (Report) Reply

  • (8/10/2014 4:54:00 AM)

    nice poem, dear. i loved your feelings. nice flow.
    good write.
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  • Dean Meredith (7/23/2014 6:28:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Ramesh. I suspect our Lord is well pleased. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (6/23/2014 10:54:00 PM)

    The boons were spread on the very first day of creation and the birds were given wings to search it. The birds were given nibs to pick it. Rmesh flied to the greater heights and picked the boons from his beautiful nibs. (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2014 4:54:00 AM)

    God certainly flows blood in your veins he gave you the gift of being you and it shows in this meaningful poem which tells the story of your thoughts for others...regards (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 10, 2014

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