Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 33,025 Points (virginia, usa)

Nature's Course - Poem by Manonton Dalan

rough edges of river banks
before my eyes, gauges
once a fiery push passed
shaking loose rocks; mud
withstand all but bruises
sign of resistance to might

water is low now as grass
gently flowing in semi-arc
where dragon flies dips
lay their eggs on stalks
fries swim chasing shadows
filling their mouth as they go


Comments about Nature's Course by Manonton Dalan

  • (5/8/2011 12:15:00 AM)

    i see it! how about 2000 in a few months? (Report) Reply

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  • (5/7/2011 10:27:00 PM)

    Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 8, 2011

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