Souren Mondal

Gold Star - 31,382 Points (10th November 1991 / Chandannagar)

Nayi Dastaan-E-Mohobaat - Poem by Souren Mondal

Manzile hai mili nayi nayi
Hai umeed jagi dil me ab firse
Unki ankhoo me kho rahe hai hum
Raat o me jag jag ke sapne dekh rahe hai hum

Saab kuch naya jaisa
Hai hawao me kaisi ye khushbu nayi
Jo dil kabhi gaya tha toot
Aj phirse dharak rahi hai kis ke liye?

Aaye hai zindigi me wo ban ke meri
Farishta aasmaano ki
Hai noor unka pario ki hasi jaisa
Hai aawaj unki mehekte bagiche sa

Unhe chu kar dil me phirse
Jaag raahi hai koi nayi daastan-e-mohabaat ki umeed

Phir se aayi hai roshni andhero me
Amabas dekho gayi mit

Phir se mohabaat hai dil me jaagi meri
Yaar mera shayad akhir kar gaya hai mujhe mil.

Souren Mondal
January 18,2016

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: ABC


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Lambe waqt ke baad phir se laut chale hai hum shaayari ke aur/ Dil me na jaane hua hai kya / Ke dhadkane rahi hai daud <3

Comments about Nayi Dastaan-E-Mohobaat by Souren Mondal

  • Akhtar Jawad (2/1/2016 7:56:00 PM)


    Hamein manavta ki nai yatra mein purane deep bujha kar naye chiragh jalane hon ge, kyunke hamein aage badhna hay, samrajywad ne shatabdion mein jo kutch humse cheen liya use wapas le kar aana hay, auor dharti ki mang ko ek bar phir taron se sajana hay. Ek bahut hi sunder kavita. (Report) Reply

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  • Akshat Shukla (1/28/2016 12:07:00 PM)


    Aaye hai zindigi me wo ban ke meri
    Farishta aasmaano ki... khoobsurat alfaaz, gahre jazbaat aur apke kahne ka karishmayi andaaz. You nailed it, man! Superb!
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/20/2016 9:51:00 PM)


    Wah wah Kya baat hai....
    Yeh shayri yun hi barkarar rahe,
    Phir se se mein ye bahar rahe
    Aap likhte rahe naye tarane
    hum phir se unhe gungunate rahe....
    (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (1/21/2016 7:32:00 AM)

    Hum sab ko zindigi me
    Khushuya aisi hi milti rahe

    Aaye jo nagme dil me
    Kagaz o me wo utarte rahe

    Sab saath mil ke hum
    Ek dusre ke tarane aise hi
    Rahe gaate,
    Zindigi doston ke saath
    Chalti rahe aise hi :)

    Thanks Asim :) May we all remain productive and write wonderful poems from the core of our hearts :)

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/18/2016 10:48:00 PM)


    Mili hai jo roshni use dil main jalaye rakhna
    Mila hai jo sathi uska sath banaye rakhna
    Zindagi ki raahon main kadam milaye rakhna... :)

    Beautiful poem...liked it....thank u for sharing :)
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (1/21/2016 7:28:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading Abhilasha..

    Roshni dil me jalti rahe
    Saathe unka bana rahe
    Zindigi me ekbar wo jo
    Tham le haath humara
    Kadam se kadam milake
    Saathe unke hum chalte yunhi rahe :)

  • Rajnish Manga (1/18/2016 10:40:00 PM)


    निराशा के अँधेरे में बैठे हुए दिल को जैसे उम्मीद की किरन मिल जाये तो भावनायें फिर से हिलोरें लेने लगती हैं. बहुत सुंदर चित्रं. धन्यवाद, सोरेन जी.
    Jo dil kabhi gaya tha toot
    Aj phirse dharak rahi hai kis ke liye?
    Phir se aayi hai roshni andhero me
    Amabas dekho gayi mit
    (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (1/21/2016 7:26:00 AM)

    Sukhriya Rajnish ji..

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2016



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