Nebulous Phantasmagoria Poem by Harley White

Nebulous Phantasmagoria

Rating: 5.0


The seas roll on at Nature's whim
as winds wail like a theremin.
Yet shines through heavens' inky scrim
the starlight of a seraph in—

or is it an illusion's spell
that tries to penetrate the dark
in cloudy interstellar hell
of lightlessness without a spark? —

while bubble branes in spatial tide
of oceanic cosmic waves
rush onward with celestial stride,
some colliding or in close shaves,

outside our string-dimensioned sphere,
swept out in space-time's quantum flow,
world-volume that is gathered here
into the universe we know…

Did we not heed the serpent's hiss?
Have karmic causes gone amiss?
What existential realm is this
where we seem sunk in an abyss?

Or is it projected despair
that's embodied in outer space
through pitch-blackness manifest there
of a doleful nebula face?

All those queries rhetorical
pertaining to visions widespread
voice viewpoints allegorical
that give vent to downhearted dread.

Earth nights shy away from first gleams
of dawning days transitory.
Though despondency endless seems,
it's only part of the story.

As brilliance and shadow contrast,
or laughter with tears of sorrow,
may hopelessness fade to the past
and there be a bright tomorrow…

Nebulous Phantasmagoria
Monday, February 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspiration (or hallucination) for the poem, as well as the image shown, fits in with the article "Light and dark"…

"…the most dramatic part of the image seems to be a dark stream of smoke piling outwards from [B77] 63 and its stars — a dark nebula called Dobashi 4173. Dark nebulae are incredibly dense clouds of pitch-dark material that obscure the patches of sky behind them, seemingly creating great rips and eerily empty chunks of sky. The stars speckled on top of this extreme blackness actually lie between us and Dobashi 4173."
https: //www.spacetelescope.org/images/potw1434a/

Also there are references to ‘branes'…
https: //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brane

As well as concepts in ‘M-theory'…
https: //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/M-theory

Image credit: ESA/Hubble & NASA
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 07 November 2017

Projected despair that is embroidered in space bellowing out a slight of hand, now that I reread this, I think I will place my bets on the doleful Nebula face due to being a heavy smoking galactic smokestack, I find myself coming back many times to reread, one cannot just sit and casually zip through one of your poems

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Harley White 08 November 2017

I admit that there is a lot to muse upon in many of my poems. I do that deliberately, of course. Plus this one implicitly includes some of my preferred ideas about the universe and existence. Thanks for rereading it and commenting again!

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Tom Allport 27 February 2017

an interesting and illuminating poem with a guarantee I think of a bright tomorrow?

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Harley White 04 March 2017

I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem... Let us hope so...

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Bill Cantrell 27 February 2017

Harley, you are so cool! ! ! ! ! I am spell bound by your intellect and how you put so much facts into poetic beauty, you are one of the most unique poets I have ever seen! ! ! As brilliance and shadows contrast, , , , a bright tomorrow to me would be.....reading more of your poetry!

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Harley White 04 March 2017

Wow, Bill, I hardly know what to say.. In my poem Genethliac are the following two couplets... ____________________ When in dim creative burn, one struggles just to turn the page— Push on to… and puzzle through… a painful poem’s final stage. Midst seas of jocund companies, I would seek to speak from shore, Hope to leave behind a line of mine that wasn’t there before… ____________________ One composes a poem and then puts it out there for others to see. You are indeed a reader who makes the process worthwhile! Thank you!

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