Necessity Of Irrelevance Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Necessity Of Irrelevance

Rating: 5.0


yet world sways by sweet breaths
glimpse of truth douses in undertone
some are sung by our own melody
some are yet unsung by the reality,

still there are what we don’t sing
by sacred will of swearing mists
and we do accord implicit of art
until blood flows in deep red,

breath comes out enlightening soul
genesis of newness adheres to world, .
that is what our quest eternal onward
seemingly resonant being riffled in blue

furrows and cliffs of borrowed time
seal off unspecified quantum of legacy
to posterity for records in history
we need to recall those miffed voices

haunted breaths somersault in us,
do we ever forsake those unknowables?
keeping shadow of inevitability betiding
by the necessity own reeks of irrelevance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

Nice poem with a very philosphical title and content! ...............

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Tom Steiglitz 15 October 2009

a remarkable logic...a masterpiece............10

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Nolan Trenton 14 October 2009

Well written poem.........You leave behing a very strong message.........10

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Macey Calleigh 14 October 2009

very creative and imagitive......... 10

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this is a wonderful poem filled by wisdom and philosophy..it touched my mind..it desrve another visit later..will keep it on my favorite..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Caitlyn Salters 04 November 2009

this is a good poem. <3 Caitlyn

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Krystal Brown 26 October 2009

Your poem is very strong and true i agree with it and its a very well written logic poem very well done

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Shamik Kumar Bose 20 October 2009

Dr Kar, I read and read this with a haunted breath, seemingly lost in the ocean of ideas and ethereal feelings. A master piece.

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

a remarkable logic...with powerful virtues...............10

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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