it is necessary to tell my story
life is when held in it
as moments flecks away
like waves devouring all earthly
do you ever mean condescending?
all these by demeanor of benevolence
sun may commit no wrong diffusing
the light and warmth together
have you ever seen the top of universe?
by the heath of Himalayas heart
snow may feel strength in divine
have we ever measure the angle
between curve of desire and craving?
do we ever know angry decibels of thunder?
that may burn the earth as half backed bone
moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue
twilight when hanging in the shadow of love
and I do remember the gleams of night
embracing the memoirs of time assailed
by the terraced valley of the sultry rune
heart chilled under pine of falling snow
have we ever measure the angle between curve of desire and craving? ...appreciate the uncommon thought process....10 - SM
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
how wonderfully you have described the nature in way both personal and artistic. gr8 write.
I think this was a confusing time of thought's and feeling which never held the nub of the feeling carried away in the thought.
Ofcourse it is nessesary, if you have such a deep meaning stoy, it is really amazing Dr, i do love this well penned for real,
Wisdom leaves its traces behind in every poem or song that is written every day! You have successfully proven that you are one of those, DR., keep them coming! 10+++ in this master piece! God Bless You! Love and Peace...
‘do we ever know angry decibels of thunder? that may burn the earth as half backed bone moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue twilight when hanging in the shadow of love’ ~ metaphor majestic…but anger is just short of one alphabet ‘A’…to culminate in danger…lol… Yeah so much honeymooning done...moon lost luster brilliancy and becoming BLUE…still romancer prefer word Moon so love will lingeringly hang for ever… even in silhouette and shadow… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I liked the poem. It is enjoyable to read. I especially loved these two lines: 'moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue twilight when hanging in the shadow of love'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what is the function of a name plate discussed in a different way! 11