M. Asim Nehal

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Necklace - Ultimate Love - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Your messages like pearls
Adorn the lace
I wear about my throat,
All your love and care
Is with me still
While you are so remote.

They remind my longing heart
Till you make your return
Until that moment
The flame of love
Will burn.

Your messages are pearl,
your gift is lace
I wore around my neck
all your cares
your love is my ultimate necklace

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Necklace - Ultimate Love by M. Asim Nehal

  • Rajnish Manga (11/28/2015 8:36:00 AM)

    This necklace made up of love and care is really beautiful and will remain as such. It will reflect the flame of longing between two love birds. I love this poem.
    All your love and care
    Is with me still
    While you are so remote.
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  • (10/31/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    Great necklace to wear.......10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2015 2:52:00 AM)

    Your poetry will become reality.-10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    Brilliant use of metaphor. An extraordinary poem of love.100 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

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